Overall Feedback
I see that my feedback from last time was not implemented for this version. See comments from 850B Module 4 about formatting and verbiage used. Dr. Overturf
3.10.23
Hi Henry,
It was great to meet with you via Zoom to practice your proposal defense today!
I had a chance to touch base with Aspen University Leadership today about the DNP program. They have made significant revisions. You are going to continue in your current program, but there are some important aspects that may affect you.
One important piece is that you are not conducting research, you are doing a quality improvement project. Your paper has to be consistent with this distinction. In the most recent draft, you still have references to your project as a “study” or as “research”. I know, these words were used in the template, which has since been revised. However, I learned today that we will not be able to pass you for your proposal defense with the references to your project as a study or research. Here are the steps you can use to update your draft
1. Open your final paper and Control-F (Find)
2. Enter “study”
3. For every instance where you are referring to your project, change Study” to “project”
4. Repeat this process for “Research” and “researcher” referring to yourself.
Please make these changes and resubmit into your Module 1 dropbox before your Final Defense Presentation.
Thank you, and please let me know if you have any questions.
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