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You have added a nursing diagnosis.
Health Inequity: I don’t see this
You have included other resources. Please omit the evaluator comments here.
I recommend that you discuss the underlying causes rather than just list them.
It looks like you still need to complete the rest of the revisions.
B3. Identification of data: Measuring outcomes related to malnutrition in order to identify trends over time is concisely discussed. Actual data related to the health concern from the local, state, or national level could not be found. You should have data that reflects the problem—a statistic for your county and then for either the state or nation.
C1. Social media campaign objective: The submission describes how the campaign will generate awareness of malnutrition to promote social justice for people struggling with hunger. The objective for the campaign is not fully developed, as it is not measurable. Make sure that this is measurable—you might need to have a pre and post survey to make sure that you have baseline data.
C3. Social media Platform: Facebook and Twitter are clearly identified as platforms to be used in the campaign; however, a rationale for why these platforms are appropriate for communicating with the target population is not included. Provide information about why these are good platforms. You can look at information from the CDC
E1. Stakeholder: The local government is identified as a stakeholder that will help the candidate reach their goal of ensuring the campaign is effective and sustainable; however, the roles and responsibilities that this stakeholder would have with implementing the campaign are unclear. You should state what each person (you & the local government) will do related to the campaign.
E3. Implementation Timeline: The work describes creating a timeline that includes posting content and recruiting followers; however, the step-by-step details are vague and are not specific to the implementation of this social media campaign. Add some “timeframes” to the steps you’ve included, such as week 1, week 2, etc.
E4. Evaluating Effectiveness: Measuring whether the content is being shared is discussed in the timeline. A description that includes the detailed criteria that will be used to measure the effectiveness of the social media marketing interventions is incomplete. You’ll need to relate this back to the objective. Once your objective is measurable, this will be easier.
E5. Costs: The goal of reaching $100,000 in donations from local businesses is included. Specific elements of the campaign that would require financial support to implement are not discussed. What are potential costs?
F2. Reflection on social media in nursing practice: A nice reflection of how the community health nurse can use social media to stay informed and engage with other nurses to promote healthier populations is provided. A reflection of how a social media marketing campaign could apply to the candidate’s current or future nursing practice is not evident. How could you use social media in your job?You have added a nursing diagnosis.
Health Inequity: I don’t see this
You have included other resources. Please omit the evaluator comments here.
I recommend that you discuss the underlying causes rather than just list them.
It looks like you still need to complete the rest of the revisions.
B3. Identification of data: Measuring outcomes related to malnutrition in order to identify trends over time is concisely discussed. Actual data related to the health concern from the local, state, or national level could not be found. You should have data that reflects the problem—a statistic for your county and then for either the state or nation.
C1. Social media campaign objective: The submission describes how the campaign will generate awareness of malnutrition to promote social justice for people struggling with hunger. The objective for the campaign is not fully developed, as it is not measurable. Make sure that this is measurable—you might need to have a pre and post survey to make sure that you have baseline data.
C3. Social media Platform: Facebook and Twitter are clearly identified as platforms to be used in the campaign; however, a rationale for why these platforms are appropriate for communicating with the target population is not included. Provide information about why these are good platforms. You can look at information from the CDC
E1. Stakeholder: The local government is identified as a stakeholder that will help the candidate reach their goal of ensuring the campaign is effective and sustainable; however, the roles and responsibilities that this stakeholder would have with implementing the campaign are unclear. You should state what each person (you & the local government) will do related to the campaign.
E3. Implementation Timeline: The work describes creating a timeline that includes posting content and recruiting followers; however, the step-by-step details are vague and are not specific to the implementation of this social media campaign. Add some “timeframes” to the steps you’ve included, such as week 1, week 2, etc.
E4. Evaluating Effectiveness: Measuring whether the content is being shared is discussed in the timeline. A description that includes the detailed criteria that will be used to measure the effectiveness of the social media marketing interventions is incomplete. You’ll need to relate this back to the objective. Once your objective is measurable, this will be easier.
E5. Costs: The goal of reaching $100,000 in donations from local businesses is included. Specific elements of the campaign that would require financial support to implement are not discussed. What are potential costs?
F2. Reflection on social media in nursing practice: A nice reflection of how the community health nurse can use social media to stay informed and engage with other nurses to promote healthier populations is provided. A reflection of how a social media marketing campaign could apply to the candidate’s current or future nursing practice is not evident. How could you use social media in your job?