Hi, I have been given feedback on my paradigms section and have included the com

Hi,
I have been given feedback on my paradigms section and have included the comments from my supervisors in the document. I just want someone who understands qualitative research to fix my paradigms section so it is specific to my study, please. I need it to be referenced as well, as this is for a PhD. I’ve put the part I want fixed highlighted in green, but have included the whole document so you understand my research.
Thank you kindly.